Outline for Voyage Into Manhood
My outline for the story including character descriptions and plot beats.
Characters:
Jacob: 33, white, short brown hair, blue eyes, 6’ athletic build and nice arms from playing tennis. He’s married to a woman named Ruth, he has a 1 year old baby named Sam. He’s been involved with Brothers In Surrender for about a year now, his Pastor recommended it to him and he decided to go on this retreat. It cost him about $500, but he was told that it would be revolutionary in helping him on his road towards recovery. He has never had sex with a man.
Alex: 27, latino, clear glasses, a mustache, and dark brown hair. He is 6’2” and has washboard abs. He is allegedly there because he’s sober in a 12 step program and his sponsor recommended he look into treatment for his sexuality. In reality, he’s there because he’s investigating this retreat as being full of abuse and a scam, and he wants to expose it.
Brad: 40, black, buff with a shaved head and a killer smile. He is 6’4” and he’s been married for 15 years with three kids. He’s completely two-faced, he’s there to get laid and he slowly fucks his way through the camp. Ostensibly he is Ezekiel’s right hand man, he’s supposed to be shepherding the guys.
Ezekiel: 53, 5’10” and white with grey hair and a goatee. He’s got a dad bod, buff but with a little extra weight on him. He’s the leader of the retreat, married with no kids. He’s been working with Brothers in surrender for 20 years.
Wesley: 30, Asian 5’6” with a slim body. He’s there because he wants to find a wife and kids.
Chris: 29, White 5’8” with red hair and freckles. He has a huge ass and a pale, smooth body.
There are a few other guys, but they’re older and we don’t see much of them.